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Saturday, July 5, 2008

Legend Of the Crystal Rose Part 5

"Ah! hah! hah! hah!

Cardo woke up from his bed and he was very exhausted as he came from a very sleep.
He stood up, and stretch his body. He open the window, it was dawn.

"Yes! I'm home! Wooo hoo!." He jump for happiness that he survive the quest.

But deep in his heart if feel disappointed that he didn't have the crystal rose.

"Well atleast I can move from the start... again. haaayyy!"

Cardo was very excited to go outside and take some air on his farm.
As he opens the door...

"Whoa!!!"

Cardo was surprised...

"You again?"

"And us!"

Cardo look down, he saw 7 little creatures.

"Yes Cardo."

Cardo move back because how come he was home and still he see these mystical creatures.

"Why are you here?"

The fairy interrupt his words.

"We don't have much time now, you need to plant this crystal roses in order to grant your wish."

Cardo was speech less as the fairy give him the crystal roses, he couldn't believe it as he was dreaming.

"Come on now! Cardy before its to late!"

It is true that blessings comes in disguise.....

Cardo gone outside and runs to Lucy's garden.
To his excitement Cardo ignore the thorns that he stepping on.

"Finally....."

Cardo secretly go inside Lucy's yard straight to her flower garden.
In there he plant the shiny crystal rose and go back home.

"Awww.... ouch! my foot hurts! damn thorns! ouch!"

He attending his wounds as he pull the thorns in his foot one by one.

"I don't care what will happen now..... Now that I finally plant the crystal rose on her garden.
It's up to her if she will love me or not..... I'm prepared now."

To his exhaustion, Cardo past out....

On his bed Cardo slowly regain his consciousness.
He moved a little and notice that there's someone sitting beside him.

As he open his eyes.....

"Good morning Cardy... finally you woke up!"

"Lu-Lucy..... you're here!?"

Cardo couldn't believe he quick sat on his bed.

"Why you don't want me here?"

"No.... no, what I mean is, it's unusual for you to visit my farm.
But it's okay, thank you for the visit."

"Cardy..... I believe you have something to say to me......"

"Lucy...... "

"I already saw the crystal rose that you curved.... and it was beautiful.
An old man pass by and he told me everything.... about you...."

"Th-the old man.....! "

Cardo stood-up, Lucy told him be carefull because of his wounded foot.

"Lucy..... it's been a long time since we know each other..."

"Cardy.... why you're hiding your tongue? Please tell me directly....."

Lucy confront him then Cardo bow his head.

"I Love You! but.... !!"

Lucy kissed Cardo on his lips after she heard the words that she wanted to hear.

"Don't say any words Cardy......" She put her one finger on Cardo's mouth.

"I feel the same way too..... I'm hiding this for a long time and waiting for you...."

Lucy hugs Cardo and lean her head on Cardo's shoulder.

"Because I feel you Cardy.... I feel you heart from the start...."

She look at Cardo's eye as Cardo's eyes was melted my Lucy's words.

"I know, you're not a man of words that's why I like you more than Rick.
He may be a man of wealth but what I want is real love... And I feel that to you, Cardy."

Both lips touch again as it was the most sweetest thing that happen to their lives.

It's more than a word to who how you love someone.........
And your action proves how real you are....
Material things won't last long and couldn't buy real love....
Let your heart guide your tongue as it speak the language of your soul.....

"Finally... hehehe... hik! you're the man. hehehe..."

An old man saw everything, he was very satisfied and vanished....

"Oh! I envy them...."

"Why not marry his son or grand son? hehehe...."

"Hump! I can't wait for long.... let's go before the spring Goddess get mad on us!"

"Hey Cardy! Best wishes hihihi.."

Cardo wave his hands as he saw the mystical creatures fading.

"I love you Lucy...."

"I love you too... Cardy.."

After a few months they got married and leave happy ever after.

The End

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